Mary Sue Meets Erik REVAMP

[Phantom]

Of all the pics I have decided to redo via photoshop, this one has been the longest overdue. The old version was surprisingly popular considering it was done all in a class on lined paper I also tried to make the Sue match the more common Phantom Sue which tries to be darker, more passionate (sometime's almost gothic) and therefore more "relatable" to Erik.

Anyway, these are all the aspects that peeve me in bad phanphiction. Although these may not all define a Mary-Sue, they're close enough in my opinion. Panel 6 is the most irritating culprit.... I don't care HOW different you want your character to be. Erik is hideous- lovable- but hideous. deal with it.

(Also, fyi, girl in the last panel is my Muse. If you're not familiar with her, she's all over my gallery ;3)